Anders,Hawke-A new Chapter ING

I like this style more than others, maybe I should keep it. I find it less Hooch and the images are better understood.
Tips?

And if you had asked me some love ... well, here it is satisfied.
Although there are no sex scenes, I find that the cartoons are still pretty. Moreover, the best stories are made of waiting ...

The story:
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