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G. Hawke - pag 27 ing by Lilithblack G. Hawke - pag 27 ing by Lilithblack
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*Lurockia has come to save us all.
I was thinking of translating this alone!
I hope that you are fine with "our" Fenris.
Our (mine and Lurockia) because every time her reviewing completely dialogue for me and from what I can understand, her translation is more faithful to Fenris's personality.
I'll never be grateful enough for that.

Forgive my bad english, once again, and you go to see the profile of *Lurockia if you have not already done.
She creates beautiful fan art and she take commissions!
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:iconlightemeraldtimeborn:
LightEmeraldTimeborn Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
DAT SMIRK
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:iconphutura:
Phutura Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014  Hobbyist
ti prego continua questa storia!! è assolutamente fantastica X3
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:icontaina-dos:
Taina-dOS Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Fenris is smiling too much. His face will just crack. :o (Eek) 
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:icontaevafae:
TaevaFae Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013
I just started reading this and I keep giggling to myself over how cute it is.
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:iconuthenera3692:
Uthenera3692 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013
Damn you draw him so perfectly :)
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Alexwind Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013
haha. cute page =)
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:iconslick1993:
slick1993 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013
Non vedo l'ora del seguito :D
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:iconkitiaramajere:
kitiaramajere Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013
late commenting, been catching up, but that last panel.. perfection.
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:iconsparkydemoness:
SparkyDemoness Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013
well drawn and enjoyable story :)
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:iconlilithblack:
Lilithblack Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks^^
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:icondemongal109:
demongal109 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Student Artist
awwwwwwwwwww ^////////^

-pokes hawkes cheek-

someone has a soft side
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ArwingPilot114 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is an enjoyable comic to read. :) I love it. You are a fantastic artist! :D
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:iconstarryeyedsinger:
starryeyedsinger Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Too cute for words! That smirk of his! :squee:
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:iconobsessed-chan:
Obsessed-chan Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
Aww. How cute. Gwern's a tsunedere.
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:iconkaydenm:
KaydenM Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013
Pardon the following, I'm going to have a fan-girl moment:
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SO DAMN CUTE IT HURTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Okay. I'm done. ^_^
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Lilithblack Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
I love these honest reactions.
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:iconkaydenm:
KaydenM Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013
Well I enjoy it when comics actually invoke my inner fan girl. Normally that is hard to do. >_<
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:iconlilithblack:
Lilithblack Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
it was fun XD
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:iconkaydenm:
KaydenM Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013
More Please! ^_^
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ElizabethDGreyWarden Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
=D
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karikun Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
I love the way you draw Fenris! It's so beautiful and accurate to the game!
I love Fenris far more than Anders, but I enjoyed your Anders story to pieces.
Gwern has more of the dark past than Phelin, but both are very interesting!
Although Gwern is clearly more dominant than Fenris, I hope we'll get to see Fenris helping Gwern get over her fear of men, and Fenris being more agressive when pursuing a relationship with Gwern!
Gwern and Phelin are both very pretty, and I can't wait for the next page! I always check my deviant art for updates from you! Keep up the good work!
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ivanesca Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
My favourite page so far. Love your artstyle, you're getting really good at drawing Fen :) Gwern is so pretty~
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Kokoro1987 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
Fenris is smiling :D
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:iconmiri1987:
Miri1987 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
Fenris smiling :3
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lourdes23 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Okay. Gwern is seriously growing on me. ;)
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IceQueenofMitera Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
She blushes? I didn't think that was possible :XD:

I'm really loving this comic

I can't decide who I like more, Gwern or Alex
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ReiKoko Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
i only have one word for this: awwwwww :D
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KendraPendragon Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
OMG, this is so adorable! Seriously, with every page I love Gwern more. Her sweetness (cooking him dinner, oooh!) and her insecurity are wonderful and make her character so much more complex.
And Fenris's smirk in the last panel makes my heart melt! Love those two sooo much!
You are an amazing artist and I can't wait for more! :)
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DrazziElder Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student General Artist
That smile of his makes me blush EVERY time. I can't resist him. Your Hawke look beautiful here. Did she dress up for him?
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EternoAprendiz Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
She looks so roman in this comic
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vampy6667 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Another amazing page dear! Keep up the great work.
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:iconrexxie13:
Rexxie13 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
Oh Gwern. So much prettier and seemingly nicer with your hair up XD
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ArualMeow Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
Gah, you draw so perfectly >w<
I love how you do facial expressions ;w; Great page!
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darlarosa Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Another beautiful and well written panel.
A few translation problems though "critique" not critic, and there are some flow issues, but it's wonderfully written

Awesome work as always
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jandwivey Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
love! pretty sure that i've said this before, but i just love the way that you draw fenris :iconohlalaplz:
... and even though i adore ALL of your characters, gwern is my favorite!

*just as a side note to the translator, it should probably be "critique", instead of "critic".
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Lurockia Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dang it. I hate it when I send something in with typos.. Thanks for catching that! ;)
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:iconjandwivey:
jandwivey Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
it happens to the best of us! you do a fabulous job translating! :heart:
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MoonDancer89 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Love this~!! :love: You capture their expression beautifully~!! :clap:
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wazubababi Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
awwww I adore this page! Such a heart warming addition I like it! Wonderful job!
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loveisgrim Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Student Artist
Okay I offically love this couple.
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gamergirl32 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
whats in the pot if its nothing ok but i like cooking so i might want to make it
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PerennialReverie Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh! This page is beautiful! I notice several changes, but they were well-worth it! You guys make a great team!
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